mu-chi-ski five plums at 6:15 pm





Blue-violet coatings

dust their mottled skins

blushing deeply with varied reds,

Natural photograms recorded on their surfaces.



Looking north.

Light quietly sooth

Their volumes.  Surfaces, stems

And leaves casting soft shadows,

Suggesting tangy juices, a hidden stone.



6:15  pm.

Loci of angular

Stems, leaves curl, drooping

Having already left their tree.

Masses lean…if succulence could talk!


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3 Responses to “mu-chi-ski five plums at 6:15 pm”

  1. Discoking Says:

    Great Blog!……There’s always something here to make me laugh…Keep doing what ya do 🙂

  2. lunchontuesday Says:

    This is lovely!

    Will there be jam and cordial this year, then?

    I’ve used the last of my stockpile…!

  3. rachelle Says:


    this is beautiful

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